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Alice's Nuzlocke Adventure Pt1

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Alice's Diary day1- An adventure begins
Mom and I have just arrived in Littleroot town, Hoenn. The movers are

settling us in, so after talking with my mom I decided to look around the

tiny town. I heard some cries for help and some kid near me told me that

there was a man being attacked by a wild pokemon. I doubted that I

would be of any help,  but I ran to the man's rescue and grabbed a

pokeball from his bag like he instructed me while trying to fend off the

menacing poochyena. I let out the pokemon. It was an adorable mudkip! I

ordered it to attack and it listened without hesitation. I felt so proud! The

poochyena ran away and the man got up, covered in scratches and dirt

and thanked me. It turns out that he's my dad's friend and the region's

main pokemon professor. I would have never guessed.


I followed him back to his lab where he put on a cleaner lab coat and told

me that I could keep the mudkip. I called it Fin right away, and took off to

show mom. Mom was surprised and then I was off again. I ran a few small

errands for Prof. Birch and agreed to a battle with Brendan, the prof's

son and my neighbour too. We won without any trouble. Fin made lettuce

out of that treecko. So when that was done I headed back to the pokemon

center to rest and relax before going further from home, when relaxation

was over (and my smoothie inhaled) I left town. Lucky for me footprint

boy moved out of my path.


Now that I had pokeballs I was ready for some action. A zigzagoon crawled

out of some bushes and right across my path. She was mine in an instant

and I called her Coonie. The three of us worked our way slowly past more

grass and other rookie trainers such as myself and made it to petaburg,

home of my dad's gym. I stopped by to see dad and was just in time to

find him talking to a green-haired kid about my age. Without even a

"hello" or a "How is your mom?" my dad asked me to go help this kid catch

his very own pokemon using one of my dad's zigzagoon. We ventured out

to the town's limits and a little ralts approached us. The kid, whose name

is Wally caught it pretty easily. I like this kid, he seems sweet. Proud and

happy, we marched back to my dad and gave back his pokemon. He fed us

some supper and then Wally headed to his own house. My dad set out a

cot in the back room and Coonie, Fin and I settled down for the night. As

I write this, both of them are curled up beside me. They're so cute

together.


Alice's Diary day 2- Seeing the real world
I woke up pretty early the next morning and had breakfast. Dad was still

sleeping so I just left him a note saying I was already on my way to the

next town. Just as I left town we ran into a wurmple. Excited, I caught it,

but just afterwords a kid challenged us to a battle. That poor wurmple

never saw his taillow coming and the others were to weak to switch in and

save the day. We barely got away and I headed back to petalburg and

buried the little guy next to dad's gym before resting at the pokemon

center. Eventually we headed back out and right into the petalburg woods.

I found a silcoon just sitting in some branches and caught it, hoping

things would be better this time. I named the little guy Silky and the four

of us moved onwards..right into some trouble. A tough guy in a funny red

outfit was harassing a business suit guy about some goods. I did what I

felt was right and stepped in saving the day. I eventually figured out this

guy was from a group who called themselves Team Magma. I ignored him

and he decided to leave after his swift defeat. The business suit guy

thanked me and gave me an cool new pokeball as a token of his gratitude

before also leaving me.


I followed the path they took, past a few bug catchers and made it out of

the woods. I had a picnic lunch with my pokemon just outside the

flowershop. A curious wingull swooped in on our little meal attempting to

steal food and instead ended up joining the team. Coonie and Fin were

pleased to meet Silky and the newly caught Gulli. It wasn't long before we

eventually (after a few more battles) made it to rustboro and checked into

the pokemon center. Once the check-up was complete, we all decided to

take a walk around townI guess you could say it was a big place. It had a

corporation building and a school and even.. a gym! We rushed inside and

battled the lesser trainers that come first. Gulli was battling amazingly,

but one of the apprentice trainer's geodude crushed her with a heavy rock

attack. She gasped for breaths before finally stopping as I scooped her up. I

was in shock. Fin came to the rescue and avenged her. He wiped out the

rest of the gym and earned me my first badge from Roxanne. I should

have been excited and happy, but instead tears rolled down my cheeks as I

made my way to the grass facing the sea. I chose a nice spot and buried

my little Gulli.


Before I could recover I was nearly trampled by that same business guy

who must be working for Devon and a Magma grunt who was running

ahead of him. Being as I am, I took chase. I caught up with the Devon guy

just on the edge of town. He was all out of breath and asked me to help

him get the stolen goods back. I felt sorry for the guy and rushed after the

Magma man. While running I nearly tripped over a whismur in the grass. I

caught her and called her Whisp. We caught the guys, saved an old man's

wingull named Peeko and brought the goods back to the Devon worker. I

was tired and ready to take a break, but the guy wanted me to meet his

boss. Why not? I followed him and met the president of the Devon

corporation. He thanked m in person and gave me a brand new pokenav

(Yay free stuff!) before asking me if I could deliver a letter to his son in

dewford. I was planning on going there anyway so I agreed.


A nice long walk back through the woods led me to the old wingull man's

door step. It looked as if he had the only boat around. Lucky for me he was

so happy about me saving his beloved Peeko that he offered to ferry me for

free. We sailed through the waves with ease. The pokemon enjoyed the boat ride

so much. They really liked feeling the ocean air on their faces while racing

towards Dewford. We arrived and I thanked the man (Mr. Briney) for the

ride. We venture off in search of Mr.Stone's son, Steven in order to

deliver our letter. Fin was in he lead pouncing on any rock that so much

as looked at him funny. It took us a while but we entered Granite cave. I

was really hoping to find a cool pokemon like an aron or something, but a

makuhita challenged me before we could go very deep. With a little effort

he was caught and named Muku. We found Steven, handed him the letter

and aimed for fading sunlight. We made it to the pokemon center just as

it was getting dark and checked in. I was able to get a nice room and

the pokemon and I passed out on the bed almost immediately. It had

been a long day for all of us.
Pokemon Ruby Nuzlocke

Well, I was inspired by =Delthero's nuzlocke and decided to write mine out more like a story too. I hope you guys will enjoy reading it.

These are just the first two days in-game for the girl called Alice.

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ChaiLife's avatar
Yeah! hoenn rocks! My dream pokemon team started out as a ralts for a starter and a tailow for a first-caught.